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alpha/engagements/2024/Jenkins/update-2024-12.md

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 Report Date: Dec 31, 2024
 ## Current Status
-The project is in its last phase for this 3-month funding. We went down to the 10k installation plugins, which proved somehow more difficult, as the maintainers were harder to reach, or much slower to answer. That's why one can see that not all PRs lead to new plugin releases, or even then not all PRs were merged nor even reviewed.
-We will have to get those PRs merged thanks to the help of admins.
-A good part of these plugins were also vastly outdated, which lead to upgrade them to safe standards before even tackling the CSP flaws.
-Nonetheless, we are very proud of the progress me made so far.
+As the Jenkins CSP project enters its final phase of this three-month initiative, the team has made commendable progress despite encountering unique challenges.
+The shift to targeting plugins with 10k installations brought new hurdles, such as unresponsive or slower maintainers, which impacted the pace of pull request (PR) reviews and merges.
+Additionally, many of these plugins were outdated, requiring significant modernization efforts before addressing CSP-specific issues.
+
+Despite these obstacles, we are proud of the strides made in securing the Jenkins ecosystem, thanks to the persistence and collaborative efforts of our team.
 
 ## Progress Summary
 ## December 2024 - Jenkins CSP Project Update
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 5. Released the [pollscm plugin](https://github.com/jenkinsci/jenkinsci/pollscm-plugin)
 6. Released the [port-allocator plugin](https://github.com/jenkinsci/jenkinsci/port-allocator-plugin)
 
-## Conclusion: Momentum and Progress in December
+## Conclusion: Progress in December
+December brought both challenges and successes as we approached the conclusion of this project.
+Despite slower response times from some maintainers and the modernization requirements of outdated plugins,
+we successfully updated and released critical plugins while laying the groundwork for future improvements.
+
+The persistence and ingenuity
+demonstrated by Shlomo and Yaroslav in addressing these complexities have been crucial to the project’s progress.
+As we wrap up this phase,
+the Jenkins CSP project serves as a testament to the power of collaboration and dedication
+in enhancing security across open-source ecosystems.
+We look forward to the next steps in sustaining and expanding this critical work.