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Updates from bedrock #404
Updates from bedrock #404
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From file changes in mozilla/bedrock@5f44a96
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@reemhamz minor issues. Otherwise, it looks good.
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home-mozilla-takes-bets = “{ -brand-name-mozilla } is taking bets to show the world there’s a business to be made with trustworthy AI. That includes putting things like human rights, data protection and transparency at the core of how these complex systems work.” | ||
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# Politico is a brand name for a news organization | ||
home-politico-cite = Politico | ||
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home-join-us-in-shaping = Join us in shaping trustworthy AI | ||
home-work-on-ai = { -brand-name-mozilla }’s work with AI isn’t just a new thing—we’ve spent years funding, building and advocating for AI that’s open, fair and developed responsibly. Our focus is on creating AI that serves the people, prioritizes transparency and supports the public good, not corporate agendas. |
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Use M dash.
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This:
"work with AI isn’t just a new thing—we’ve spent years funding"
already is U+2014
EM DASH
@peiying2 Do you mean another occurence?
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The only inconsistent thing here is that while this sentence uses the dash correctly — without the spaces on both sides (at it should be IIRC), the other string on L64 has spaces around it. So the only thing I see here wrt dashes would be making these two occurrences more consistent: mozilla/bedrock#14602 (comment)
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I've asked the copy writing team for clarification on spaces and em dashes. It seems we are doing it a couple different ways currently and since we are trying to go a little more colloquial with our tone, that might be true of our grammar too so I don't feel confident making a call myself.
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Oh, it was hard to see it. I agree with @janbrasna that there should be a space before and after the M dash, but it has been inconsistent throughout. If there is a branding or style guide somewhere, let me know. For now, I will take this as is and move forward.
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I talked to someone in brand and they said spaces around the dash are the way to go.
They also said they don't have a style guide.
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home-feature-blur-your-location = Blur your location & activity using <span>{ -brand-name-mozilla-vpn }</span> | |||
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remove an extra line break
en/navigation_v2.ftl
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navigation-v2-mozilla-ai = { -brand-name-mozilla-ai } | ||
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navigation-v2-mozilla-ventures = { -brand-name-mozilla-ventures } |
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I wonder whether these two should be removed for now as not to surprise anyone — the menu items were not actually added in the end.
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@stephaniehobson who can make this decision? Should we keep them and they will show up eventually?
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For now, it doesn't seem like they're going to be added to the nav anytime soon, so I'm going to remove them from our codebase for now. Thanks for the call-out @janbrasna !
From file changes in mozilla/bedrock@3489c49
From file changes in mozilla/bedrock@9362016
From file changes in mozilla/bedrock@5f44a96