Tweak Language in Release Notes

release-notes/release-notes-v10.0.0.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Counterparty Core v10.0.0 is a very large release comprising many improvements a
 # Upgrade Procedure
 This release does not include any protocol changes, so there is no deadline for upgrading. However it is **strongly recommended** that all users upgrade as soon as possible, in particular to avoid consensus problems due to non-determinism in previous versions. The Counterparty Core API is also unchanged for this release.
 
-Because this release includes numerous changes to the database schema, a full database rebuild is required and the major version number has been bumped from 9 to 10. Follow the updated installation instructions in the [README](/README.md) to download and install the latest version of Counterparty Core, run `counterparty-server kickstart` (while `bitcoind` is not running), then start the server with `counterparty-server start`. The rebuild should happen automatically, and it should take between 8 and 24 hours hours to complete.
+Because this release includes numerous changes to the database schema, a full database rebuild is required and the major version number has been bumped from 9 to 10. Follow the updated installation instructions in the [README](/README.md) to download and install the latest version of Counterparty Core, run `counterparty-server kickstart` (while `bitcoind` is not running), then start the server with `counterparty-server start`. The rebuild should happen automatically, and it should take between 8 and 24 hours to complete.
 
 **IMPORTANT** Be certain that you are running the latest version of AddrIndexRs (v0.4.6).
 
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ Because this release includes numerous changes to the database schema, a full da
 
 ## Documentation and Testing
 * Fix test suite, with automated builds on supported operating systems
-* Add Github Workflows for building, testing and running automated code scanners:
+* Add GitHub Workflows for building, testing and running automated code scanners:
     * PyLint
     * Bandit
     * CodeQL
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Because this release includes numerous changes to the database schema, a full da
 * Rewrite Dockerfile and publish new official Docker images
 * Create Docker Compose file as an alternative to Federated Node
 * Change default `bitcoind` user from `bitcoinrpc` to `rpc`
-* Changed default port for communication with AddrIndexRs to `8432` (and `81432` for `testnet`)
+* Change default port for communication with AddrIndexRs to `8432` (and `81432` for `testnet`)
 
 
 ## Command-Line Interface
@@ -69,13 +69,13 @@ Because this release includes numerous changes to the database schema, a full da
 
 ## Refactoring and Performance Optimizations
 * Rewrite `kickstart`, splitting work across two Python processes using shared memory and queue for communication
-* Activate write-ahead-log in SQLite and implement `apsw.best_pratices()`, improving performance and fixing crashes from deadlocks
-* Fix database version checking which launched a rebuilds instead of rollbacks / reparses
+* Activate write-ahead-log in SQLite and implement `apsw.best_practices()`, improving performance and fixing crashes from deadlocks
+* Fix database version checking which launches a rebuild instead of a rollback / reparse
 * Add numerous missing database indexes
 * Fix collisions between existing database indexes
 * DRY and refactor database index creation
 * DRY and isolate all SQL queries in `ledger.py`
-* Heavily refactor of `log.messages` and `log.log`.
+* Refactor `log.messages` and `log.log` heavily
 * Add additional fields and rows in the `messages` table (the messages hash will change)
 * Fix database integrity check and re-include assert conservation check
 * Migrate to log-structured database for simpler and faster rollback and reparse
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ Because this release includes numerous changes to the database schema, a full da
     * Isolate transaction parsing inside `gettxinfo.py` module
     * Heavily refactor code; eliminate unused code blocks
     * Isolate dispenser logic in `get_dispensers_outputs()` and `get_dispensers_tx_info()`
-* Activate check software version every 24H
+* Change software version check interval to 24 hours
 * Add the possibility to reparse from a given block on minor version change
 * Add warning with confirmation dialogue to bootstrap command, and `--no-confirm` flag
 * Add REST endpoints optimized for tables that were altered during the migration to a log-structured database: