Copy tweaks

axflow · Jan 20, 2024 · b61fc98 · b61fc98
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diff --git a/src/pages/index.astro b/src/pages/index.astro
@@ -38,19 +38,19 @@ import GitCompareArrows from "../components/icons/GitCompareArrows.astro";
       <h1
         class="via-zinc-200 bg-gradient-to-tr dark:from-white dark:to-zinc-400 from-zinc-800 to-zinc-600 bg-clip-text pb-6 md:pb-10 text-center text-4xl font-medium text-transparent opacity-90 bg-blend-screen drop-shadow sm:text-6xl lg:text-7xl"
       >
-        Take
+        Build
         <span
           class="text-clip bg-gradient-to-tr dark:from-violet-500 dark:to-teal-200 from-violet-600 to-teal-400 bg-clip-text font-mono italic tracking-tighter"
         >
-          control
+          continuously learning
         </span>
         <br />
-         of your AI data loop
+         AI products
       </h1>
       <p
         class="text-md max-w-2xl pb-10 text-color text-center opacity-80 bg-blend-screen sm:text-lg"
       >
-        Ingest, iterate and redeploy.
+        Ingest production data, run experiments, redeploy.
       </p>
       {/* end: hero-copy */}
 
@@ -91,8 +91,10 @@ import GitCompareArrows from "../components/icons/GitCompareArrows.astro";
         <p
           class="max-w-lg leading-7 text-center text-color-700 text-lg pb-10 md:pb-20"
         >
-          Avoid time lost in iterating in code, and copy pasting prompts in
-          spreadsheets.
+          Stop copy pasting prompts in spreadsheets.
+          <br />
+           Measure prompt quality, experiment, and deploy directly from the
+          Studio.
         </p>
 
         <div
@@ -172,10 +174,10 @@ import GitCompareArrows from "../components/icons/GitCompareArrows.astro";
               <div>
                 <div class="flex items-center gap-2">
                   <Crosshair size="18" />
-                  <p class="font-medium">Detect undesired behavior</p>
+                  <p class="font-medium">Detect undesired behaviors</p>
                 </div>
                 <div class="text-color-700">
-                  Identify and understand undesired behavior from your AI
+                  Identify and understand undesired behaviors from your AI
                   system.
                 </div>
               </div>
@@ -186,8 +188,8 @@ import GitCompareArrows from "../components/icons/GitCompareArrows.astro";
                   <p class="font-medium">Time travel</p>
                 </div>
                 <div class="text-color-700">
-                  Replay production traffic with changes to understand what
-                  would improve the system.
+                  Replay production traffic to understand how to improve the
+                  system.
                 </div>
               </div>